Thursday, 26 February 2015

Wednesday, 25 February 2015

Writing

WALT retell a Myth / Legend about Maui


Long ago the sun went to fast so nobody was able to work. So Maui said " we need to try and slow the sun" but one brother said " the sun is to hot it will burn us". But Maui just started. They made flax ropes and chanted them so they wouldn't burn. Then they went up the mountain to see the sun when they got at the top they made a clay wall and hid behind it. When the sun started raising the Maui said " yes" and they through the ropes and held on to the sun. Then Maui got the magic jaw bone and hit the sun with all his might. Then he said to the sun " move slower " that's how Maui made the sun go slow.  


Success Criteria: we will know we have achieved this when
we have
capital letters to start sentences?
full stops to end sentences?
At least 2 characters?
A setting? Where
An opening sentence
what the characters, see, hear,
smell, touch or feel?
an exciting part or a problem
an ending where the problem is
solved?
different words to start sentences?
speech marks for words spoken

Monday, 23 February 2015

Reflection

WALT reflect an object





Success criteria:


  • we look at different Poupou 
  • we fold our paper in half 
  • we practice drawing half of our Poupou
  • we use pastel to colour in half of our Poupou
  • we fold our paper in half to find the line of symmetry and to see the other side of the poupou
  • we can colour in the reflection of the Poupou  




Wednesday, 18 February 2015

Writing

WALT describe a character Purpose (Why are we writing) - To present clear ideas in a simple structure to suit my audience.

Groot 

Groooooooot is from guardians of the Galaxy he can grow his fingers because he is a humanoid plant. He can not talk properly instead he seas I am groot no mater what. If he dies you can plant a bit of him and he will grow into how big he was. Groot can grow taller he can grow really fast and he can grow into his name like the bottom picture.

Success Criteria:

  • Draft 
  • Title 
  • Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end? 
  • Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.) 
  • Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
  • Describe what they look like
  • Describe something your character does to show us what kind of person they are
  • language features - similes punctuation - 
  • Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends? 
  • Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in make sure it makes sense - Proof read





Tuesday, 17 February 2015

Sunday, 15 February 2015

Maths translation

WALT use translation

This is my translation of korū

This is it.




swimming goals



I need to go more strait.

Thursday, 12 February 2015

Wednesday, 11 February 2015

Writing

WALT describe a character
Purpose (Why are we writing) - To present clear ideas in a simple structure to suit my audience.

Success criteria

  • Draft
  • Title
  • Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end?
  • Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.)
  • Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
  • language features - similes
  • punctuation - Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends?
  • Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in
  • make sure it makes sense - Proof read

This is a post that I made that discribes stuff about me.


                  Draft

My name is Cooper I have black hair like a black bird and I have brown eyes and I'm friendly. I'm athletic I've got really big feet like Bigfoot. I am really tall and I really like playing basketball I'm good at it because I am tall I hope I'll be in the NBA and my favourite team is OKC. I love dogs my favourite breed is a German Shepard. My favourite fruit is passion fruit and My favourite game console is ps4 and Xbox one. My second favourite animal is a rat I want 1 but my mum hates them. I hate jerseys and pants. I love scaring my sister.


Tuesday, 10 February 2015

Reading project

WALT:apply our knowledge of the story

This is our plan for our project me Sam and Harrison have been working on it for a week.



This is our finished model we hope you like it.










Wednesday, 4 February 2015

waitangi day

WALA: the treaty of waitangi

We had to fill in this sheet about Waitangi Day.




And we did this word find with our talking buddies.



Tuesday, 3 February 2015

Me poster

This is my me poster I made on my iPad.